Quick Peek at a Winter Constellation

Here now and not for long...kick me a little feedback on this indie-music inspired jig.

Triangulum
Again, December surrounds us
Decembering around us. Dear,
here, deer, snow stars and a sky so high and crisp
my lungs bellow, below.

How hard it is
to be starry and bright
knight of my night, so up so light
and dense, so all and once I
wasn’t pretending
those wishes
were carbuncles, osprey, the love, my love
the sound that weighs, waves me,

what about that, really?

Listen:
happens all around us
we happen in an instant
we ache the close distance
we do, don’t we do?

Ambivalent light & o what a night, my
Tea and a biscuit, we’ll skip all those dishes,
save for tomorrow
a lot and its sorry
leftovers, a day’s what you get.
& now, tossed
through the tumble, a skip and a stumble

& an all-berry crumble
with a bit of a bite of whipped cream.